Closure

Closure

Written by Daniel Williams

When me and my sister Diane got off the bus we started walking home. Brandon was driving his Ford Taurus and kept coming past us. He looked at me while he drove.

“What are you doing?” asked Brandon.

“I just came home from school,” said Derrick.

Brandon drove away and went home. Derrick wanted to follow him home but that Diane would tell dad. They walk home and got settled. Derrick plan what he was going to do.

“Dad, can I go get some candy?” asked Derrick.

“Sure,” said his dad.

Derrick did not get his candy and instead went to see Brandon. But wait a second to get his candy. But anyway, Derrick wants to get his candy and went to see Brandon. It was snowing and cold. Derrick stomps over the snow and breathe heavily.

Derrick knocks on Brandon’s door and he answered.

“Hey, Derrick,” said Brandon.

Derrick came inside and sat down on the couch.

“Let me have a coke, please,” said Derrick.

Brandon gave him his pop.

“I saw you walking past me, what you were coming home from school?” asked Brandon.

“Yes, I did come home.”